Get Unstuck. Finish Your Draft With Precision — Not Guesswork.
You'll leave knowing exactly what's not working, why it's not working, and what to do next to finish the draft.
Every stuck draft has a structural reason. I find it.
I work at the structural level — plot, tension, character engines — so you stop rewriting the wrong things and start revising with precision.
You don't have a writing problem. You have a structure problem.
Who this is for: Writers who have a draft in progress — or a fully outlined project — and have hit a wall at the structural level. If you know something is wrong but can't figure out what to fix, you're in the right place.
No guesswork. No endless notes. Just a plan that works.
- A clear diagnosis of exactly what's broken in your story
- Why the story isn't working — the real problem beneath the symptoms
- A prioritized list of what to fix first
- A usable revision roadmap you can act on immediately
How It Works
- Secure Your SpotClick below to pay and lock in your session at the limited-time rate.
- Complete the QuestionnaireAnswer specific questions about your story. No manuscript needed — just your answers.
- The 80-Minute ConsultI'll have reviewed your questionnaire and prioritized the structural issues before we speak. We get on the call and go deep.
- Leave With a Revision RoadmapActionable steps. Clear direction. Authority over your draft.
We work at the structural level of your story.
During the call, we identify:
- What your story is actually driven by
- Where narrative tension breaks — or never forms
- The structural decisions your draft is unconsciously avoiding
- What's holding, what's leaking, and what needs to change
You don't need more feedback. You need a plan.
The 25-Minute Fit Guarantee
At the 25-minute mark, we review the plan and exactly the issues the call will tackle. If you don't feel like it's the right fit, we end the call right there — and you receive a full refund. No questions asked. By that point I will have already reviewed your questionnaire and come prepared, so you'll know immediately whether this is the right next step for your draft.
Real results from real writers.
"Working with Michele has been wonderful. She forced me to see the holes in my story. The feedback was timely and exceptional. She really understands story structure, which is the key."
"OMG! Michele was an extreme help. She was able to pick apart my screenplay and break it down with what I needed to do to enhance it. I am looking forward to making the changes and working with her again."
"Michele delivered kind, thoughtfully delivered notes — so helpful with specific ideas and great attention to detail, building the character drama with great knowledge and best ideas for scene structure. Fantastic, articulated, excellent notes. Thank you so much!"
"Michele is awesome to work with. This was the second time hiring her for a project. Will definitely use her services again."
Common Questions
What happens after the call?
At the end of the session, one of two things happens: you take the structural direction and revise independently, or we determine whether more support makes sense. Either way, you leave with authority over your draft.
Will you read my script or manuscript before the call?
No. I will ask specific questions about your story in the questionnaire. All you have to do is answer them — I'll use those answers to guide our session and arrive prepared.
What if I don't know what's wrong with my story?
That's exactly what I'm here for. You will leave the call with a clear, actionable path to revisions.
How long is the call?
80 minutes. Focused, structured, and diagnostic by design.
Stop Rewriting Blindly. Start Revising With Precision.
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