Narrative Diagnosis Consult
Your Story Is Stuck — And You Don’t Know Why
You’ll leave knowing exactly what’s not working, why it’s not working, and what to do next to finish the draft.
Is this you?
You’re stuck in the middle
Your story falls apart after the inciting incident
You keep rewriting Act 3 hoping it will fix Act 1
In one focused consult, I’ll pinpoint exactly where your story breaks — and tell you how to fix it.
I work at the structural level—plot, tension, character engines—so you stop rewriting the wrong things.
What You Get in 60 Minutes
I identify the exact structural failure in your story
We map the missing or broken turning point
You leave knowing with a plan
Usually $279
3 DAYS ONLY
Professional plot diagnosis + roadmap to get you unstuck!
FLASHSALE
Led by a professional story strategist with 13+ years experience in writing and consulting.
⏳ VERY LIMITED SLOTS -- Why?
Because this is a live diagnostic session, not a recording or group call — I can only take a small number of writers.
👉 If you're stuck, overwhelmed, or spinning your wheels…
This is your sign to get unstuck now, not “someday.
WHY am I doing this?
Let me be straight up...
Freelance platform(s) algorithms once rewarded good work and good reviews. I never had a problem getting seen and securing jobs.
That's changed.
Now, they mimic social media platforms—rewarding ad spend over skill.
What does this mean for me?
My work is no longer judged on quality or results.
But now...
I'm launching my own site for services!
Secure the $79 Flash Sale launch rate. 3 days only!
What clients say...
Identified the problem immediately
"Michele is a true pro. The content and format of her coverage for my scripts have been exceptionally helpful."
Bryan Snow
Clarified the main character fast
"Michele really got me to think about the storyline and the main character within it. She is a pleasure to work with."
Tracy Abrahamson
Pinpointed what wasn’t working
"Michele was extremely helpful and understood the story I was trying to tell. She helped me overcome plot issues that I've been struggling with. I could not be more happy with the results."
B. Colby
Gave actionable fixes, not just critique
"Upon receiving my notes for my feature script, there is no doubt that Michele is a professional screenwriter. She seems to have the ability to sense what you need and deliver it. A lot of consultants can dish out criticism, but don't show you how to fix it. She provides a process to make sure all your questions get answered. She rises in expertise above consultants in the industry."
Coug64 (anonymous)
Producer
This is a diagnostic call — not coaching, not theory, and no pitch at the end.
⏱️ The Stop-the-Clock Guarantee
This isn’t a webinar or a sales call.
It’s a working session.
My promise to you
At the 15-minute mark, we pause.
If you’re not already seeing clear value, we stop the call — and you receive a
FULL REFUND
WHY THIS WORKS
You get one hour of expert ears and guidance on your story to tell you:
“Here’s the problem. Here’s how to fix it. Here’s what to do next.”
Writers walk away with:
Aha Moments
Direction and a clear plan
Renewed Momentum
60 Minutes. Zero Overwhelm. Real Progress.
Fix the story problem that’s been slowing you down — in one focused, high-impact session.
Is this you?
Types of issues we can tackle!
✅ 1. Define Story’s Central Question
What's driving your story?
How does it affect your plot points?
✅ 2. Explore your Story Spine
Define story’s central problem.
What is your protagonist's external goal?
What is your protagonist's lie?
How the goal and the lie affect turning points in the story.
✅ 3. Get a Clear Path for What Comes Next
Short, confidence-boosting roadmap for your next chapter moves
“Write this next.”
“Here’s the pacing direction to follow.
✅ 4. Define and Strengthen Central Conflict
Structure and sharpen the central conflict
Improve character tension
✅ 5. Define Character Arc (What is your character's arc outside of 'Hero'?
Explore a deeper character arc
How your character's arc is woven into plot
✅ 6. Untangle Plot Confusion
Clarify
Tighten plot threads
Eliminate dead weight
✅ 7. Theme Clarification
Identify the thematic spine
Explore how the theme affects choices
By the end, you can breathe again.
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Flash Sale
3 DAYS ONLY
79
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One-hour
Early Bird
Until January 7th
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One-hour
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