Story systems and structural diagnosis for writers at every stage.

Path one

Build Your Story

For writers who need clarity, structure, and a system that turns scattered ideas into a cohesive story from the ground up.

Path two

Fix Your Draft

For writers with a completed draft or stalled story who need sharp structural diagnosis, actionable feedback, and clear direction on what’s not working — and why.

Hello,

Writers,

I'm a narrative surgeon.

I pick apart stories to find structural gaps, character arcs that misalign with the plot, pacing issues, and plot holes — then give writers clear, actionable steps to strengthen the story from the inside out.

My Services:

Narrative Diagnosis Consult

Personalize your call to your needs

Pinpoint where you're stuck

Actionable steps


A focused 1-hour call to pinpoint exactly where your story is stuck—and give you clear, actionable steps to move forward immediately.

Narrative Surgeon Plot Development

Collaborative experience

Easy process

Receive an outline you can write from

A guided, collaborative process where I ask the right questions to pull your story out of you—shaping your answers into a tight, cohesive blueprint you can confidently write from.

Narrative Story Coverage

Multiple pages of development notes

Far beyond standard industry coverage

Shorts start at $150

A focused, high-level evaluation of your story’s structure, character arcs, and tension—pinpointing what’s working, what’s not, and exactly how to fix it before you waste time rewriting.

My Products:

Your brain shouldn’t need a detective board to figure out what’s broken in your plot. As someone with ADHD, I developed a story system that cuts through overwhelm and long explanations, simplifies complex structure, and helps writers structure their story without drowning in endless theory.

Clear. Actionable. Built for you.

The Squirrel-Proof Story System

Writer's Toolkit

Digital Download

Logline Workbook

Major Story Transition Guide

Story Structure Psychology: The Hacks You've Been Looking For!

Beat Sheet- Dynamic- Rule-Based

Everything in the toolkit +

A rule-based story structure system that guides you step by step to build a clear, cohesive, and fully developed story from start to finish.

The Complete Story Engine

Squirrel-Proof Story Compass-- IN BETA

Real-time story structure diagnosis—so you fix problems as you build, not after.

$Coming soon

We’ve been wired for story structure since the beginning.

It isn’t learned. It’s remembered.