Get Unstuck. Finish Your Draft With Precision — Not Guesswork.

You’ll leave knowing exactly what’s not working, why it’s not working, and what to do next to finish the draft.

I work at the structural level—plot, tension, character engines—so you stop rewriting the wrong things.

Consult review: Joseph Boyou

"Working with Michele has been wonderful. She forced me to see the holes in my story. The feedback was timely and exceptional. She really understands story structure, which is the key."

Meet Michele

For writers who already have a draft or a clear project—and are stuck at the structural level.

What you walk away with:

  • Clear diagnosis of what’s broken

  • Why the story isn’t working

  • What to fix prioritized

  • A usable revision plan

No guesswork. No endless notes.

How it Works

  • Book the session

  • Complete the questionnaire

  • Schedule the call

  • Get a detailed structural diagnosis consult

  • Leave with a revision roadmap

The Session

I will have reviewed the questionnaire and formulated a list making sure we prioritize what's most needed.


During the call, we work at the structural level of your story:

  • what’s holding

  • what’s leaking

  • what needs to change

You won’t leave with a pile of notes. You will leave with actionable steps

This call is diagnostic by design.

We identify:

  • What your story is actually driven by

  • Where narrative tension breaks (or never forms)

  • The structural decisions your draft is unconsciously avoiding

  • The real problem beneath the symptoms

You don’t need more feedback.
You need a plan.

What happens after the call?

At the end of the session, one of two things happens:

You take the structural direction and revise independently, or

We determine whether more support makes sense.

Either way, you leave with authority over your draft.

Will you read my script or manuscript before the call?

No. I will ask specific questions about your story. All you have to do is answer them.

What if I don’t know what’s wrong with my story?

That's what I'm here for. You will leave the call with a clear ACTIONABLE path to revisions.

Book Your Story Diagnostic Call

Stop rewriting blindly.
Start revising with precision.

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