Story systems and structural diagnosis for writers at every stage.
Path one
Build Your Story
For writers who need clarity, structure, and a system that turns scattered ideas into a cohesive story from the ground up.
Path two
Fix Your Draft
For writers with a completed draft or stalled story who need sharp structural diagnosis, actionable feedback, and clear direction on what’s not working — and why.
Hello,
Writers,
I'm a narrative surgeon.
I pick apart stories to find structural gaps, character arcs that misalign with the plot, pacing issues, and plot holes — then give writers clear, actionable steps to strengthen the story from the inside out.
My Services:
Narrative Diagnosis Consult
Personalize your call to your needs
Pinpoint where you're stuck
Actionable steps
*Starts at $99 an hour
A focused 1-hour call to pinpoint exactly where your story is stuck—and give you clear, actionable steps to move forward immediately.
Narrative Story Coverage
Multiple pages of development notes
Far beyond standard industry coverage
Collaborative Process
*Shorts under 15 pages start at $150
A focused, high-level evaluation of your story’s structure, character arcs, and tension—pinpointing what’s working, what’s not, and exactly how to fix it before you waste time rewriting.
Narrative Surgeon Plot Development
Collaborative experience
In-depth process
Receive an outline you can write from
*Packages start at $750 for shorts and pilots.
A guided, collaborative process where I ask the right questions to pull your story out of you—shaping your answers into a tight, cohesive blueprint you can confidently write from.
My Products:
Your brain shouldn’t need a detective board to figure out what’s broken in your plot. As someone with ADHD, I developed a story system that cuts through overwhelm and long explanations, simplifies complex structure, and helps writers structure their story without drowning in endless theory.
Clear. Actionable. Built for you.
The Squirrel-Proof Story System
Don't let the cuteness fool you. This system is designed for writers with attention deficit,s like myself. Writing is hard enough, but when everything is a distraction, it can seem hopeless to finish anything.
Writer's Toolkit
Digital Download
Tools for Developing Story
Major Story Transition Guide
Story Structure Psychology
$27
Beat Sheet- Dynamic- Rule-Based
A rule-based story structure system that guides you step by step to build a clear, cohesive, and fully developed story from start to finish.
PLUS the writer's toolkit
$77
The Complete Story Engine
IN BETA
We’ve been wired for story structure since the beginning.
It isn’t learned. It’s remembered.
